#those rules; but i think either the abatraction plot or the quest plot should have been save for later
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Ngl ever since I watched TADC, Pomni has been rotating in my brain like rotisserie chicken. Feeling silly, might make her an F/O.
#ive been so TORN on whether or not i like d.igital c.ircus#like it was a fun watch and i love the character design#but oh my god the pacing SLOW DOWN#i get that its a pilot but m.urder d.rone lowkey has the same issue#i know the point of a pilot is to introduce the main cast and the world and its rules and how the characters interact with and break#those rules; but i think either the abatraction plot or the quest plot should have been save for later#one of them in the pilot is fine; you obviously need plot and conflict#but following p.omni in the a plot quickly became overwhelming with information overload bc of how tense and fast paced the situation was#it literally caused me to forget abt the b plot entirely#i think it was supposed to act as a moment of peace and quiet from the a plot; but with those sections being so short its not evenough time#away from the craziness in the a plot to properly process everything#it makes the pacing feel nonstop even tho there are actually breaks for the b plot#SORRY for dumping a rant in the tags so suddenly; i did overall enjoy the pilot and want to see more of p.omni#shes so skrunkly and squeezable and i want to bite her head and shake her around like a chew toy (affectionate)#but i also rlly want the show to do good from a writer's perspective
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