Subplot
There is this one scene where the main character is implied to hook up with her neighbor. It is also implied (not heavily) that he lives alone bc he murdered his parents. That's all good and jolly.
There is a subplot where there is someone who was the true criminal behind the crimes the main character was accused of. I wanted that person to be her neighbor. I had made a whole subplot where he apparently murdered his parents bc he had been stalking main character.
It is a great distraction from who the real criminal is. Red herring. However, it would absolutely change the whole book. I would have to weave it in and make up his character.
OR
I could just forget his existence and delete any mention of him.
I know what I have to do but I don't know if I have the strength to do it.
It will 100% make my book stronger, but it's so much work :(
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INSTAGRAM AU , jacob elordi
fc; sabrina carpenter!!
warnings: cursing, mentions of fucking, anddd i think that’s all
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CELEBRITYNEWS
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CELEBRITYNEWS A new video posted on GQs’ YouTube, as well as a online article with Y/N L/N speaking about New music, New, or should we say old relationships, and her upcoming tour! She states that there will be a new album coming out in a few months titled ‘Silence Between Songs’. A little further down in the video she begins speaking on the topic of her tour, she says that she’ll also have a appearance on Taylor Swifts’ Era Tour. And which may surprise us all, it looks like she has let go of the grudge that was held against her ex, Jacob Elordi since it seems they’re back together👀👀. Opinions?
USERNAME well .. very interesting i should say
HATER ew gosh, jacob should just get back with joey at this point.
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YOURUSERNAME
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YOURUSERNAME pretty ‘n pink🩷 .
JACOBELORDI even prettier in nothing😩😩
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↳ USER OH. MY. GOD.
↳ ALEXADEMIE WHAT THE FUCK???!!!
USER YALL THINKING WHAT IM THINKING??? DID A MAKE UP FUCK HAPPEN??
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JACKHARLOW You’re beautiful
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↳ ZENDAYA jacob ain’t gonna like this too much ..
↳ JACOBELORDI she looked even better last night when i was 9 inches deep in her guts lol
↳ YOURUSERNAME jacob. nathaniel. elordi.
↳ USER 9 INCHES???? I JUST KNOW Y/N IN PAIN.
CELEBRITYNEWS Well I guess we were quite right, right everyone?
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MADDIEZIEGLER pretty girl😍😍
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↳ YOURUSERNAME i love you🤍
↳ KENZIE we miss u y/n!!!
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JACOBELORDI
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JACOBELORDI as of lately w you @𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫𝐮𝐬𝐞𝐫𝐧𝐚𝐦𝐞
YOURUSERNAME fun fact: first picture was taken the morning after we fucked and the second picture was taken right before we fucked😁😁!!
RANDO you guys are so grossly open about your sex life, i’ve never seen anything like it.
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↳ YOURUSERNAME well i genuinely couldn’t care less lol, FUCKING IS NORMAL AND I LOVE TO DO IT
↳ USER someone must not be getting good dick, or if you happen to be a hating ass man u must not be getting your dick wet correctly!!
JOEYKING lol she’s beautiful
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ROSSLYNCH 👀👀
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YOURUSERNAME added to their story !
JACOBELORDI added to their story !
(the fact that this duo will most likely never happen because joey and sabrina are actually really close friends so💔💔, they’d actually so hot together if you fucking think about it bro)
(and i know i say this on every post but PLEASE SEND REQUEST, like actually i flip out everyday trying to figure who i write about and if you guys request people it would make it a whoooooole lot easier!!)
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